When I Was Shy - by Sophie

When I Was Shy

Demons danced when I was shy
Laughed at me when I wouldn’t try
It felt like a pin going straight in my eye.

They would never give me one last chance
They just danced around me with an evil glance.

I let it go on
I never did no wrong.

Until one day I could take no more
This was the final straw.

I got up off my two little feet
I knew it would not go down a treat

I acted till my throat was sore
Then the demons danced no more.

By Sophie

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wow

Thu, 19/06/2008 - 18:19 — mee

i think this poem is really good, the words in it mean so much, there is so much emotion is this poem, i mean WOW!!

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